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Remains

by ~guardiandeity12

As I lay my head on my bedroom floor
Flashes of dreams collides my sanity
Vivid images of you, I crave for more
Your scent on my skin, feeds my vanity

You stayed as an illusion, you're unreachable
Allured by your voice, I'm imprisoned
I tried to preserve you in my world, I wasn't able
I was deranged, I was demented, I was mislaid.

Fragments of your existence still remains
I still hear you whispering in my ear
My imagination has failed me once again
Keeping me alive, keeping me insane.
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The remains of what there is left behind. Keeping you alive, but delusional at the same time.
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honest in it's sadness

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"Surely if we knew what bitterness fate held in store, we would shrink back in fear and let the cup of life pass us by untasted."

'Kushiel's Dart' by Jacqueline Carey
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Mood: Love ~stayintwisted Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
why is it so often pain that allows us to write,, good job sis

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hell girl I wouldn't keep offering to spend the rest of my life with you if I didn't value you a lot. :rose::rose::rose:
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Pain serves as a inspiration .. sad.. but true.

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"Now, there comes a point where a reasonable man will swallow his pride and admit that hes made a terrible mistake. The truth is, I was never a reasonable man." -Edward Bloom

-excerpt from 'Big fish'
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Mood: Love ~stayintwisted May 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
sometimes the inspiration is almost worth the pain that causes it

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hell girl I wouldn't keep offering to spend the rest of my life with you if I didn't value you a lot. :rose::rose::rose:
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*skywestphalia Apr 30, 2009  Student General Artist
Wow! Nice poem you got there... ^^

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Art & role-playing :pointl: my anti - drug ;)

My FanFiction account: [link]

Feel free to join the new RP group -> #EXORXICIMUSS
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:iconguardiandeity12:
Hey thanks!

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"Now, there comes a point where a reasonable man will swallow his pride and admit that hes made a terrible mistake. The truth is, I was never a reasonable man." -Edward Bloom

-excerpt from 'Big fish'
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Mood: Neutral *skywestphalia May 5, 2009  Student General Artist
Your welcome... ^^

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Art & role-playing :pointl: my anti - drug ;)

My FanFiction account: [link]

Feel free to join the new RP group -> #EXORXICIMUSS
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~Drastic-Afterthought Apr 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I completely adore this.
Like you're trying to kind of keep something alive that you know isn't going to last, or isn't there?

Beautimus imagery. =) Goodjobs!

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I keep forgetting to remember to forget you.
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Keeping it alive when it's already dead. Yeah. Delusional thoughts.

Thanks for the comment and the :+fav: :)

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"Now, there comes a point where a reasonable man will swallow his pride and admit that hes made a terrible mistake. The truth is, I was never a reasonable man." -Edward Bloom

-excerpt from 'Big fish'
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